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Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Learning English (draft 1 )

I have learned English since I was fourth-grade. At first, I didn’t study English well. When I commence learning English, I thought it is difficult for me to learn English. I was very downhearted about the poor English grades I got in school. Consequently, my mom let me went to the cram school to take the English lessons after school. Little by little, my results are better than before. Nowadays, English is become the common language in the world. Everyone wan to learn English well. A great many parents asked their children go to the cram school when kids were very little. Many people go to major in English. I hope that I can study harder in English.

4 Comments:

Blogger 郭包子 said...

When I commence learning English, I thought it is difficult for me to learn English後面那一個it代表的就是to learn English!所以可以不用再寫一次
Everyone wan to learn English well.Everyone want to learn English well.
結論句是不是有點怪怪的?

7:46 PM  
Blogger 飛奇 said...

"Everyone wan to learn English well."
wan應該是wants
"A great many parents asked their children go to the cram school when kids were very little. "
a great 多餘

1:21 AM  
Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

我是瀞婷"
Everyone wan to learn English well→wants
a great or many 挑一ㄍ八

5:12 AM  
Blogger GIGI said...

my mom let me "go" to the cram school
使役動詞要加原動喔!

2:17 AM  

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