Autobiography-1 〈draft 1〉
My name is Cing-Yu Zoul. I was born in Tainan city on October tenth of 1989.
There used to be six members in my family. But, I am living in a single-parent family now. My family is included my mother, aunt and me. My sisters and brother live together with my father. Sometimes, I go home to see them and we keep in touch by cell phone. My mother and aunt run a tea shop in Tainan downtown. I am a good assistant in the shop. Mom is gratified by my help. I annexed lots of experiences from it.
I like to play basketball and volleyball. I also join the volleyball club in school. On the weekend, I play basketball with my sisters, I find pleasure in it. Sanguine, expansive and lively are my characteristics. I like to listen to the music and go to the movies in my free time. I want to cultivate my mind by reading.

3 Comments:
I [annexed] lots of experiences from it.
-->用annex就可以了
寫的不錯喔!
可是還有第二段還沒po
annexed→不必過去式,,
妳也可以寫→
I get lots of experiences form it.
還有第二段的個人特質、專長、興趣
短的好~
這就是老師說的”列點式”嗎
你可以寫的更好!
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