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Tuesday, March 27, 2007

TV program (draft 1)

To choose TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most important channels to provide information and entertainment, it maybe has some disadvantages. Some programs full of violence and sexy have harmful effect to teenagers. To spend too much time watching TV is hurt eyesight, too. For this reason, we should choose the TV programs which helpful to body and mind. Most important thing is not be couch potato.
School life (draft 1)
I always make a busy school living. Ever since I became a senior high school student, I was be anticipated go to the college. And that examination is a severe competition for enter college. Therefore, I was forced to study night and day. Every day, heavy strain of school work is a burden for me. That why I always busy at school and home. In addition, I was also forced to give up my favorite extracurricular activities. I wish that I could have a colorful school life.

4 Comments:

Blogger 飛奇 said...

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7:56 PM  
Blogger 飛奇 said...

Some programs full of violence and sexy have harmful effect to teenagers.
前面再加個關代比較好 →some programs which are full of
sexy是形容詞,改成lust或sex比較正確

8:00 PM  
Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

(1) full of violence and sexy have ...
→sexy (a.)改成 sex or lust (n.)

(2) is hurt eyesight (兩ㄍ動詞唷)
→will hurt eyesight

8:04 PM  
Blogger 郭包子 said...

TV program
full of 前面要加be 動詞
TV programs which helpful to body and mind. helpful前要加be動詞
Most important thing is not be couch potato最高級前面要加the
School life
I was be anticipated go to the college.有兩個be動詞= =?

8:13 PM  

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