Computer〈draft 2〉
Computers have become one of the most important helpers in modern life. It is common to use by everyone and there are almost own a computer in every household. We can do homework or search for information by using computer. Furthermore, a notebook computer, in particular, makes it easier for us to deal with any information without the limitation of space or time. Personally, I have a liking for computers. There are a lot of accounts about it. For example, a teacher can use the computer to teach students. That we don’t go to school and we can study in the house. We can transmit-receive e-mail and talk with friends in the telephone on-line. It is economize on money. To be sure, the computer has become a very good companion we could not do without it. I think that we will have greatly advanced about computer in our knowledge.

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Computers have become one of the most important helpers in modern life. It is common to use and almost everyone owns a computer at home. We can do homework or search for information by using computers. Furthermore, a notebook computer, in particular, makes it easier for us to deal with any information without the limitation of space or time.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. There are a lot of accounts about it. For example, a teacher can use the computer to teach students. That we don’t go to school and we can study in the house. We can transmit-receive e-mail and talk with friends in the telephone on-line. It is economize on money. To be sure, the computer has become a very good companion we could not do without it. I think that we will have greatly advanced about computer in our knowledge.
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