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Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Autobiography-2 〈draft 2〉

I had joined the flute team in elementary school. After that, I also went weigh in the track and field team. In junior high school, I’ve taken charge of discipline in my class for two years. I have also been a class leader for a semester. This is not easy job and need lots of patience. But I do my best in my work. I went in for a lot of races in the athletic meeting. I got the pretty good accomplishment in the game. After the Joint Entrance Examination for senior High Schools, I was admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, and I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. In the first year, I joined the school team of volleyball. It took me a lot of physical efforts. After that, I quit the team for my study. Now, I serve as a volunteer of the counseling office. I love the job.

I hope that I can earn a lot money in the future. I will enter a higher school to learn some professional skills to obtain employment. In order to have my dream true, I will do my best. In addition, the more I understand about knowledge, the more I want to be a rich woman.

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Blogger gimliong said...

I had joined the flute team in elementary school. After that, I also went weigh in the track and field team. In junior high school, I’ve taken charge of discipline in my class for two years. I have also been a class leader for a semester. This is not an easy job and needs lots of patience. But I do my best in my work. I went in for a lot of races in the athletic meeting. I got the pretty good accomplishment in the game. After the Joint Entrance Examination for senior High Schools, I was admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, and I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. In the first year, I joined the school team of volleyball. It took me a lot of physical efforts. After that, I quit the team for my study. Now, I serve as a volunteer of the counseling office. I love the job.

I hope that I can earn a lot money in the future. I will enter a college to learn some professional skills to obtain employment. In order to have my dream true, I will do my best. In addition, the more I understand about knowledge, the more I want to be a rich woman.



* 第二段可在篩選重點來敘述,有點流水記帳,似乎不適合。

6:43 PM  
Blogger gimliong said...

* 更正:第一段可在篩選重點來敘述,有點流水記帳,似乎不適合。

6:43 PM  

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