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Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Making decisions〈draft 1〉

Growing up means making my own decisions. My age is old enough to make decisions and responsible by myself. I am mature and independent little by little, so I can not have to dependent on others. I should make up my mind with reason.
The hardest decisions that I ever made was come to this school. My family didn’t agree on my decision. Because there is a high school that I can recruit it near my neighborhood. The school near my house and have convenient communications is the account foe me to go to the school. Nonetheless I felt disinclined for attend this school. Then, I make decision by myself.

2 Comments:

Blogger 郭包子 said...

小而巧~你可以再寫多一點
I can not have to dependent on others.這句很怪耶…要不要改成I can independent on others.
didn’t agree 可以寫disagree
Then, I make decision by myself.>>>Made

7:56 PM  
Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

is old enough to make decisions and (be) responsible..

so i can not (have to)is redundant.

agree on my decision(s)

the school (is) near myhouse..

foe→for?

8:37 PM  

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