Making decisions〈draft 2〉
Growing up means making my own decisions. My age is old enough to make decisions and responsible by myself. I am mature and independent little by little, so I can independent on others. I should make up my mind with reason. The hardest decisions that I ever made was come to this school. My family didn’t agree on my decision. Because there is a high school that I can recruit it near my neighborhood. The school is near my house and have convenient communications is the account for me to go to the school. Nonetheless I felt disinclined for attend this school. Then, I made decision by myself.
posted by Carol @ 8:56 PM
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Growing up means making my own decisions. My age is old enough to make decisions and to be responsible for myself. I am mature and independent little by little, so I can depend on myself. I should make up my mind with reason.
The hardest decisions that I ever made was to decide to come to NTCVS. My family didn’t agree on my decision because there was a high school that I could recruit it in my neighborhood. The school is near my house and have convenient communications is the account for me to go to the school.????? Nonetheless I felt disinclined for attend this school. Then, I made decision by myself.
* 用字、文法、句型結構錯誤接連出現，語意也有問題，請重新書寫。
* 你的寫作人稱為何，讀者如何知道this school是哪所學校?
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