An Embarrassing Experience (draft 2 )

To think of my embarrassing experience, there were many interesting things about me. One day, on my way to the classroom wiht my friends. When I made a turn, I went to stray with my friends. Later, I saw the sight of friend's back. I ran to behind her back and hit her shoulder lightly. But she scared me when she turned back. Because I don't know who she is. And then, I fled when I saw the student right away. I felt so disgraced then. Once bitten by a snake, one shies at a coiled rope for thr next ten years. Hereafter, I find my riends or my family when I wander away with them, I will be more careful.

Learning English (draft 2 )

I have learned English since I was fourth-grade. At first, I didn't study English well. When I commence learning English, I thought it is difficult for me. I was very downhearted about the poor English grades I got in school. Consequently, my mom let me go to the cram school to take the English lessons after school. Little by little, my results are better than before. Nowadays, English is become the common language in the world. Everyone wants to learn English well. A great parents asked their children go to the cram school when kids were very little. Many people go to major in English. I hope that I can study harder in English.

My bedroom (draft 2 )

My bedroom is a warm place. When entering my room, you can see a big bed. I take to the bed very much. When I felt tired, I loved to lie on the bed to relax. There is a TV on the cabinet in the left corner. The right wall is lined with the commode that has a lot of clothes. The small cabinet is next to the bed. I furnish a big mirror between the TV and the small cabinet. The bookcases are put on the left next to the bed. I have many pillows and dolls on the bed. I like to hold my pillow when I was sleeping.

My bedroom (draft 1)

My bedroom is a warm place. When you enter my room, you can see a big bed. I like the bed very much. When I felt tired, I loved to lie on the bed to relax. There is a TV on cabinet in the left corner. The right wall is lined with commode that it has a lot of clothes. The small cabinet is next to the bed. I furnish a big mirror between the TV and the small cabinet. The bookcases are put on the left next to the bed. I have many pillows and dolls on the bed. I like to hold my pillow when I was sleeping.

Learning English (draft 1 )

I have learned English since I was fourth-grade. At first, I didn’t study English well. When I commence learning English, I thought it is difficult for me to learn English. I was very downhearted about the poor English grades I got in school. Consequently, my mom let me went to the cram school to take the English lessons after school. Little by little, my results are better than before. Nowadays, English is become the common language in the world. Everyone wan to learn English well. A great many parents asked their children go to the cram school when kids were very little. Many people go to major in English. I hope that I can study harder in English.